Twentieth Century Fox brought Jay Presson Allen in to rewrite David Mamet’s screenplay of Barry Reed’s novel The Verdict because executives believed Mamet had strayed too far from the source material. Allen delivered a version the studio approved, but the screenplay was then handed to Robert Redford, who began altering it to better fit his screen persona. The producers eventually took the material away from Redford and offered the project to Sidney Lumet. Lumet had recently seen Mamet’s play American Buffalo performed by Al Pacino and preferred the directness and tension of Mamet’s original screenplay. In the final outcome, Fox paid Allen for her rewrite and Redford for his attempted revisions, only to return to Mamet’s original script. The incident illustrates the star-centered power structure of Hollywood development, in which a studio could commission competing versions and allow a major actor to reshape a story around himself before the director restored the screenwriter’s initial conception.
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The Verdict / 1980s
Twentieth Century Fox brought Jay Presson Allen in to rewrite David Mamet’s screenplay of Barry Reed’s novel The Verdict because executives believed Mamet had strayed too far from the source material. Allen delivered a version the studio approved, but the screenplay was then handed to Robert Redford, who began altering it to better fit his screen persona. The producers eventually took the material away from Redford and offered the project to Sidney Lumet. Lumet had recently seen Mamet’s play American Buffalo performed by Al Pacino and preferred the directness and tension of Mamet’s original screenplay. In the final outcome, Fox paid Allen for her rewrite and Redford for his attempted revisions, only to return to Mamet’s original script. The incident illustrates the star-centered power structure of Hollywood development, in which a studio could commission competing versions and allow a major actor to reshape a story around himself before the director restored the screenwriter’s initial conception.
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